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The car drove up, like any typical car on these hot summer days. Carefree with a group inside, sharing a vacation moment.

In this particular car two younger ladies got out and stretched, which seem to indicate they traveled a distance in their sub-compact car. They seem to continue a conversation about relationships, giggling away as they quickly walked across the parking lot. They were heading toward the information center. Most likely needing to use the facilities.

One was named Sam, she was pretty. He liked Sam.

He sat there watching intently at the two young ladies disappear into the building, under mirrored Oakley sunglasses. Once they disappeared from his gaze he turned his attention to their car. Red, Honda, typical.

BRKY 987

He memorized the license plate on their car, which was the only car in the parking lot. strangely enough considering, it was tourist season and usually this place was busy.

Perfect he thought...

29 comments:

  1. This is a good story Indeed! But I need to know more regarding to this story! ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚✌️

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  2. There is a link under "Next Chapter" Thanks for taking the time to read!

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  3. I really love your writing style. Love to keep reading similar post. Bookmarked:)

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  4. This sounds intriguing! Keep up the good work.

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    1. Thanks for the encouragement hope to see here more often!

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  5. Of course, I had to continue reading! Haven't finished the story yet but like your writing style! Will be back!

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    1. Its heart felt that you take an interest. It may actually inspire me.

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  6. I really want to jump in and keep Sam and her friend away from the "stranger." I hope you write in that they have mace and a kick-a$$ karate chop. :)

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  7. Ha! So true have to kids of my own, this has been a big fear. We can only try to teach to smart and safe while enjoying life. Thanks and I hope continue to read the next chapters.

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  8. You left me wanting to know more. Now I'm scared for the two girls. LOL!

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    1. Well you are most welcome to check further chapters here http://www.tatteredwords.me/p/stranger.html.
      Thanks again for reading and commenting!!

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  9. I hadn't heard of micro-fiction before, but reading your post, I think I understand. This is an intriguing intro to your story. Definitely makes me want to read the next chapter link. What are this strangers intentions? Should these girls be paying better attention to their surroundings?

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    1. Check this out if you are intrested. It the remaining chapters currently posted. Thanks http://www.tatteredwords.me/p/stranger.html

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  10. Great writing. I am intrigued in what comes next. Good details. I can see it in my head.

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    1. You are welcome to continue the story! There is a "Next Chapter" link in the post or you can catch all the chapter in menu at the top of this site under "The Stranger."

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  11. Love the humor in this ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ great story.

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  12. pretty good intro to a story, makes you want to know more

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    1. If you are intrested there is a "Next Chapter" link in the post or you can catch all the chapter in menu at the top of this site under "The Stranger."

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  13. Interesting build up. Are micro-fictions, like little excerpts? Like mini-mini chapters? :)
    xoxo
    Annie

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    1. Thanks! Yes they small stories normally. I build off it by using the idea as chapters, to allow me and the reader to able to quickly keep up to a story.

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  14. i love the intrigue and the writing style :) Keep up the good work

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  15. This story is really interesting! I would love to finish the whole story as soon as possible!

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    1. You are more than welcome to finish up at https://www.tatteredwords.me/p/stranger.html

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  16. Very intriguing, i love your simple yet captivating writing style

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